Sunday, June 1, 2008

William Blake

I really enjoyed the Songs of Innocence and of Experience by Blake. I found it very interesting how Blake's outlook in the different poems could be so contrasting. The contrast between the innocence and the experience was very evident to me in the The Chimney Sweeper poems of the two states.
In the songs of innocence, The Chimney Sweeper discusses a child that was sold to be a chimney sweep at a very young age. The chimney sweeps are clearly upset about the conditions they are being placed in. For example, Blake writes "Theres little Tom Darce, who cried when his head That curl'd like a lambs back, was shav'd". Tom was not happy about his head being shaved, but he is told not to be upset because this way his hair will not be ruined. This passage demonstrates perfectly the optimism that much of the time accompanies innocence. The poem goes on to talk of a dream that Tom has about dying. Once again there is not a negative tone that goes with dying. In this poem Tom dying is the best thing that could happen because he will be st free. The passage states, "And came an Angel who had a bright key, And he open'd the coffins and set them all free". This simple dream was able to cheer Tom up and make him happy while he was doing his work. Tom was able to see that his freedom and happiness would come if he was "a good boy".
In the songs of experience, however, The Chimney Sweeper gives off an entirely different feeling. Right from the first passage, the reader is able to sense the unhappiness of the chimney sweep. Blake writes, "A little black thing among the snow; Crying weep, weep, in notes of woe!". The reference to black in the first line can be viewed as dark and pessimistic. Blake goes on to write, " They clothed me in the clothes of death, And taught me to sing the notes of woe.". In this passage they refers to the chimney sweep's parents. I think that this passage gives off a very negative and resentful attitude. Later Blake writes "They think they have done me no injury: And are gone to praise God and his Pries and King Who make up a heaven of our misery". The chimney sweep is clearly bitter toward his parents in this passage. They put him in this horrible life and now they are off praising God about it. There is also a very different perspective on God in the two poems. In the songs of innocence, God was viewed as a savior from the current life and gave hope to the chimney sweep. In this poem, however, God is no longer a savior; he is now viewed as part of the problem. In the chimney sweeps mind, God is part of the authority that has placed him in this life and given him no way out. He no longer views heaven as an escape, it is now just a continuation of his misery.
The difference of the two poems demonstrates the different outlooks of innocence and experience. Many times experience corrupts the innocent and takes away hope and certainty that previously existed. In my opinion it is very important to find some type of balance between innocence and experience. I do not think relying solely on either one is sufficient because they provide such different outlooks.

3 comments:

Jonathan.Glance said...

Heather,

Very good focus on these two matched poems by Blake, and very insightful observations about the poems. Your use of quotations from the text helps to establish your credibility and provides good traction for your ideas. (Be sure to proofread your posts, though; there are a few typos in this one.)

One avenue you might pursue, though, is whether Blake's "Chimney Sweeper" poem in Songs of Innocence is quite so innocent as you claim. The "Experience" version would seem to suggest a rereading of the first one the reader encounters. Is it really a child's "duty" to die young as a chimney sweep?

Ivan Besancon said...

Heather,

Good job on this post. I liked your description of "Chimney Sweeper." You did very well at citing the passage in the poem to back up your arguments. I completely agree with you when you mentioned "Once again there is not a negative tone that goes with dying. In this poem Tom dying is the best thing that could happen because he will be st free." It is awful to have to say that, however it is understandable that he is "looking forward" to dying because his life is extremely miserable and harsh at that moment. Death is seen as a deliverance in that case and not something to be scared of. I believe Blake also attemps to not only talk about the little boys in that particular situation but rather about all the people that were being exploited at that time period. Living just to "barely survive", when you have no other issue but suffering in life, is not exhilarating. Could that be a starting point on the controversy of "euthanasia"..?

Linh Huynh said...

I liked how you mentioned the difference of God's presence in the two pieces. Him being the savior that he is known to be versus being "part of the problem" The descriptions you give of "The Chimney Sweeper" are insightful in seeing the conditions back then.